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The first draft

Your first draft is a chance for you to write something on the topic, to start to organise your thoughts and ideas. According to the essay structure, the introduction sets the current context, tells the reader what the essay will cover and states the position on the topic the writer is taking. Below is the first draft of an introduction to this essay topic.

This is the first draft of the introduction to the essay topic. Can you identify any problems with this draft?

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