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The previous email (see below) has problems with the beginning. They are:

  • too much unnecessary information
  • the important information comes at the end.

Poor example of beginning

Compare this to:

Godd example of email beginning.

Why is this better?

  • It tells the reader the purpose of the email in the first sentence.
  • There is no unnecessary information.
  • It is short, concise and to the point.


Activity 1




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